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Thursday, August 8, 2019

The Amazing dog flinger!

Hey Readers,
For literacy, we have been looking at Adverts, after some discussion on Adverts we got to make our own, so I and my friend Brittney made an advert about a ball flinger for a dog, it took us a while but in the end, the work paid off. 
Bye Readers!



2 comments:

  1. Hi CariDee, what an amazing animation. You have really captured the idea of using persuasive language, and have made it really fun. I particularly like the way you put the slobber on the ball, and drew the /flinger'. Well done :o)

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  2. Hi CariDee, It’s Taylor here. I really liked the detail you put into your advertisement, especially how you made the characters expression change! I think it’s awesome you got to discuss advertisements in your class, what did you discuss? Is there a reason you chose the ball flinger? Maybe next time you could tell us a little bit more about what you learnt and discussed :)

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