Kia ora Bloggers!
As you can see from the title I am happy that school is back, well not really, I am talking about online school/home school. My school just started doing it today and its pretty fun, its kinda like school, its the same work but from home. For our literacy today we were talking about what our new topic is this term, The Wizard Of Oz. Our task was, What do you think Oz looks like? So this is what I wrote:
I open my eyes and see colours I have never seen before. I looked around and saw mushrooms the size of trees and trees the size of mushrooms. A vivid rainbow hangs over my head as I skipped down a yellow brick road. I looked to my right and saw bright green bushes and colourful wildflowers scattered everywhere across a bright green field. I looked to my left and saw little cottages lined up perfectly. Off in the distance, I see an old brick castle with black paint ripping off the walls inside.
So what do you think? Do I need to change anything? Give me some feedback to help me change things, Well till next time, See ya Bloggers!
Wednesday, April 15, 2020
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Hi CariDee, what an amazing description of Oz! It sounds like an absolutely beautiful place. I'm so glad you're happy to be back doing school work and are enjoying it online so far. Did you set up a timetable for yourself? I would love to see it! Caitlin :)
ReplyDeletehello Cari-Dee,
ReplyDeleteWow that is cool- i can imagine being there lol i like how colourful it sounds there.
Who lives in the castle? Cant wait to read your next post!
From Eva